I enjoyed reading about the game you taught some other kids, its sounds like fun. I am pleased to see you have kept your instructions for this game clear and simple so that they are easy to follow. Please can you go back and add some more detail to your blurb. You will need to begin with the LI, then explain which CARE award this task fits under. It is important that we give a bit more information when we are explaining why we created our DLOs as not everyone who reads your blog posts will understand what the learning was about. Don't forget sentences begin with a capital letter.
Hi RJ
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about the game you taught some other kids, its sounds like fun. I am pleased to see you have kept your instructions for this game clear and simple so that they are easy to follow. Please can you go back and add some more detail to your blurb. You will need to begin with the LI, then explain which CARE award this task fits under. It is important that we give a bit more information when we are explaining why we created our DLOs as not everyone who reads your blog posts will understand what the learning was about. Don't forget sentences begin with a capital letter.
Mrs A