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L.I how to read the book and to describe what they like to do and what the story write likes about the character in ls1 we have been reading these books for the past six weeks the book is
about a little girl named Cassie and she went to a birthday party and she went play a game with
two girls and she could hear them talking about her.
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ReplyDeletethanks Alisha for going through my follow up
DeleteI also went through your 10 words to pornouns and I like your words you choose
ReplyDeleteI went through your story web and in the problem part it does not tell me anything
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Deletethanks Alisha Alison Robert worked in a university well she was
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ReplyDeleteHello RJ
ReplyDeleteToday I went through your work
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ReplyDeleteToday I went through your story web what you did well is you told good information of the book I learnt that cassy was smart because she made rocket shoes what you could do better is you could fix your problem part it does not tell me anything
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ReplyDeleteToday I also checked your Newspaper template what I liked the pictures you put into it and what I learnt is that cassy is nice because she let the other peole win what you could do better is you could tell us what game was cassy playing
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ReplyDeleteI just went to your finding ten words that you don't know and finding the meaning of 5 what I like is your words what I learnt was is a new word but what you could do better is could but the meaning
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ReplyDeleteToday I wnet throught your character web and what you did well is you wrote down how he usually is I learnt how cassy looks like and what you could do better is you could write more in the persinality part
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ReplyDeleteI just checked your settings work and what you did well is you wrote what was around her. what I learnt was that cassy does not care if anyone bully's her. What you could do better is add some more detail to it
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ReplyDeleteI checked your Author research and what you did well is you put in information for me to read what I learnt is that Alison Robertson was in unervirsity when she wrote this book.What you could do better is put other stuff about her to.
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ReplyDeleteI went through your 5 questions what you did well is you picked good question what I learnt is cassy wants his mother to be happy what you could do to makke it better is you can pick another character and do five questions
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ReplyDeleteI checked your sequence of events and what you did well is you wrote the chapters but you wrote stuff over and over again. What I learnt is that cassy did not liked the moment she was in.